ext_88958 ([identity profile] cateris.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] planetarylight 2011-09-13 07:30 pm (UTC)

*added to memories*

:))) I haven't been reading you in quite a while, I will not lie. BUT OMG, THIS WAS SO SWEET AND OPTIMISTIC AND NICE! I MISSED THAT AT YOUR WRITING!

And although I was partially bisexual about the potential of cheesiness of this, I LOVED IT!

First of all I loved the first person narration you wrote this in. I haven't encounter this in such a long time :)

Second: and even if I notice how your thumb is shaking, slightly, as it moves to caress the back of my hand.

OHGODTHISDETAIL! YOU COMPLETED RUINED ME WITH THIS DETAIL!!!! gdgbgfhbgfhnfgh

Then unexpected moments like:

I'm distracted, and focused, with the magazine in front of me when I notice you're staring at me so intensely. I drop the magazine and turn and you, and there's an expression in your face I'm not sure I saw before.

You're grinning, like you know an amusing secret you can't share.

"I do."


+ comments like:

I'm new here and I'm randomly asking people, my band leader with stone eyes and cold behaviour, from all people; if they believed in fate.

:)))) Seriously, there is so much charm and mocking jokes Toshiya does on himself. I loved that I was able to be able to read all this.

Their dialogues and their dynamics all through the fic were delicious. I loved that I had the chance to read something like that now :)

And man the old times... :)))) so.much.love





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